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Alluring eyes
but never tense
with a daze
of innocence

Beautiful skin
almost of cream
the caress of you
is but a dream

Sultry, but cute
at the very same time
so playful
so sweet
the bells shall surely chime

Every so often
a bountiful pair
but you timelessly have
soft, silky hair

Every time
I see that smile
I hope that you
will stay a while

As I finalize
I sincerely don't mean
to steal some words from Vai
I too wish
to be alive
in an Asian Sky

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My entry for #lyriclub's "Heart On Your Sleeve Contest".

If ya can't tell, I wrote this about my adoration for Asian women, particularly Japanese Gravure Idols :heart:

The last line is simply a reference and quote to Steve Vai's song of the same name.

Image credit to: :iconconaleptemixco2205:
It is of the adorable Mizuki Horii :iconhurrplz:

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Gorgeous girl.
And, very fantastic word play in the poem. Very captivating that it is.

An awesome job you did.
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Mood: Anger ~Rubzie Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OKAY I HAD ENOUGH OF THIS BULL-SHIT!! first of all big breast don't mean shit!!I have big boobies and thats all a guy ever sees in a girl!The poem ....pshh FAKE!! Outer beauty isnt cute... it disgusted me to see a man doesn't care about any thing a girl really is..hey and guess what i hate my native country for all the perverted men who rape they're own daughter just cuz we look beautiful and like woman!!! >:[
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~Arekage Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I completely agree. People should be attracted to eachother by personality instead of outter appearance alone.
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:iconxmrfrogx:
This poem... it is truly beautiful! ._. <3

FAVOURITED x
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~Cojiro-BlueCucco Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, kindly! (:
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!balokdok May 16, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
why do famale asian idols looks so hot and male idols look so gay haha

thats a beautiful poem btw
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:iconrushandruleit:
There are men in Asia?! Who knew?
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~LokiTheSaint Jul 31, 2011  Student Writer
hey I'm asian and I'm a guy and I'm not gay >.<
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~Cojiro-BlueCucco May 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wouldn't know, I've only seen the females, haha. :highfive:

And thank you very much ^_^
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:iconzombywoof92:
I like the poem, I wouldn't have thought it was about your obsession for cute asian women if I didn't know you
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